Complaint Letter

Dear reservations@hiresortjamaica.com
Hi, my name is Leo. My family went on a reunion at your All inclusive resort at Montego Bay, Jamaica. We didn't have the best of times. You guys gave my cousins room away.  Then later her card didn't work.  When one person isn't happy no one is you know.

   You see her husband was giving her son a shower. He heard the door open and heard some voices. It wasn't his wife's voice. It was a group of teenage voices. He walked out and kicked them out. He didn't think much of it until later. His wife tried to back to the room and her card wouldn't work. She decided to try her husband's and that didn't work either. Also there was a smoker in the building. I could see him out on the balcony.

All I want is to just not do it again. Fire whoever was in charge of that from July 4-July10 in 2013. Also make sure that the room is empty. That is all. We will both win. You get to keep your customers and continue making money and we get to be happy.

Thanks for reading
Leo

Thanks For Reading
Leo.

Cc: rj09bps@birmingham.k12.mi.us,   lyngyrl@hotmail.com,   lyndon861@hotmail.com,    

I STILL CANT BELIEVE IT

OMG, It is still going through my head what happened. We have the money for the tractors and are about to be able to Skype them whenever we want. This is crazy. People are in tears, we will go next year, we get to Skype them. Aaaaaaaaaah. Omg. OMG. I had to watch the student-staff volleyball game. Wasn't fun. The students won. I think. I wasn't paying attention to it. Still, wow.

Complaint Letter

Dear reservation@hiresortjamaica.com

 Hi, my name is Leo. My family went on a reunion at your All inclusive resort at Montego Bay, Jamaica. We were really looking forward to it. Although it didn't go so smoothly. You guys gave my cousins room away. When one person isn't happy no one is, you know.

 

 You see her husband named Chris was giving her son CJ a shower. Somebody walked in. It wasn't his wife. It was a group of teenage kids. He walked over and kicked them out. He didn't think much of it. Later my cousin Tania tried to go back to their room. Their cards wouldn't work.

 

 Also it happened to other people. None of which were in my family but I saw people upset about that.  Plus there was a smoker in the building. I could smell it. I could also see him out on the balcony.  All I want is to have you guys get it right. Just let people keep their rooms. We will both win, you keep customers, we stay happy. Deal?

 

 

Thanks For Reading
Leo.

Cc: The big guy

AHW GRAPES!!!!!!!!!

This post is about grapes. My favorite fruit. Red is by far the best. Anyway I have a half day today again. So  will do what I call HUMAN GRAPE MO!LVIING BASKET BALL. Sounds fun right. I will throw a grape up in the air while running then try and catch it in my mouth. Most of the time I fail but oh well. I am at school and bored. The SS test was easy as usual. I finished the imagination station thing as usual. Oh one last thing. EVERYBODY VOTE FOR MALAYA ON AMERICAN IDOL. MY CUZ'S BF. REPRESENT!😠😠😠😠😠😠

SPANGLISH!!!!

This is Spanish. My whole post is in Spanish. Starting now. Tenemos un día medio. Estoy emocionado por eso. Todavía no puedo jugar a los videojuegos sin embargo. Estoy muy aburrido. Voy a contar algunas bromas ehh. Imagina esto, ahora soy un viejo. Tengo en la mano el primer teléfono celular. ¿Sabes esos grandes bocinas con un botón por cada número. Bueno. Mi tiempo se ha acabado bueno. Hasta Luego.

Bad Dancers

I was thinking  why are there all of these competitions about who is the best. American Idol, who is the best singer. So you think you can dance, the best dancer, Amerca's Got Talent, the most talented. Why not a competition for the worst people. For singing it could be "Time to break some eardrums" or for dancing it could be im bad and i know it. you know. I just dont get it.

Ugh,

Guess what, I forgot my nexus at school. Stinks right, anyway i have to write this on an actual computer. It took me 2 WHOLE MINUTES to get to this page. Thats a long time. I have a test tommorow in math. It is bigger than any other test so far because if I raise my test percentage ( currently at 88%) to a 90% I will get in Algebra 1.

The Blasy

Well the blast had some new stuff. Jacobs ladder man, I couldn't even stay on. that is crazy hard. The wrecking ball (before we discuss this any little kids who I creamed, I'm sorry) was very interesting. Yeah I sort of knocked a bunch of little kids off but no biggy. Except I gave this one kid a bloody nose, JK. But still the blast was fun.

5 authors

1. Rick Riordan ( http://www.rickriordan.com/home.aspx) because it has his twitter and things right there. Even though there are a lot of things it is organized.
2. Orson Scott Card ( http://www.hatrack.com) because it has a video.
3.Sharon Draper ( http://sharondraper.com) because it has a slide thing
4. Sir arthor conan Doyle ( http://www.sherlockholmesonline.org) because its not the best but better than number 5.
5, ME. (this blog) because it doesn't have anything special.

Complaint letter

Ji
Hi, my name is Leo. My family went on a reunion at your All inclusive resort at Montego Bay, Jamaica. It didn't go so smoothly. You guys gave my cousins room away. We didn't have the best of time. You see her husband was giving her son a shower. Some random people walked in. Then he went out and kicked them out. Later their cards didn't work. Also it happened to other people. Plus there was a smoker in the building. All I want is to have you guys get it right. Just let people keep their rooms. Please.

Thanks For Reading
Leo.

Cc: The big guy

Gerbil continued

He was a good man, you could say. Except he wasn't a man at all. He was a GERBIL. A gerbil that lead gerbils out of extinction. He was just a little theif. He didn't think k of it as theivery. He thought of it as well survival. He stole from the humans who tried to kill him. One day he got tired. He was bored and his parents were away fighting against the next tribe, the purple people eaters. No they aren't really purple and they don't eat people.  Thy just are weird. The farmer was out harvesting crops. It was his last chance to get food. He wasn't going to miss it for anything. He dashed up the hill to the farm and saw something beautiful.

It wasn't like anything he'd ever seen before. It was an onion. Onions are more sacred than candy. Imagine your favorite candy. Then if you multiplied how much you love it by 2 then maybe, MAYBE, you would love it as much as a gerbel loved an onion. He dashed at it. He didn't even try to be sneaky. He made so much noise, the farmer heard him. He didn't notice that though. The farmers back in the day didn't have shoes. They weren't like that. Man, get on their level. He tried to block the onion with his foot. The gerbel was already in the air. BTW's the gerbels name is Bralieph.

Bralieph bit into what he thought was the onion but the taste tasted terrible. I mean really bad. Like eating a foot bad. That's because he bit into the farmers foot. The farmer exclaimed "mnjlbjnohngujhkbjbjb!" That's what the verbal heard. Gerbels don't speak English,they speak gerban. He fell back hard. The farmer had a shear and was ready to kill him. He knew his doom was near.

He crunched so hard you could almost hear his bone crack. The farmer took his shear and saw the little useless geebel just lying on the ground. Braileiph tried to play dead but the farmer was too smart for that. The farmer grunted as he was about to kill this little guy. But instead of death which Braileiph thought was going to happen, he was flying. Not like superman but he couldn't control himself. He landed hard at the bottom of the hill. The farmer yelled "AÀAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH! YOU LITTLE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!" He was not happy. The farmer turned and dashed down the mountain to not just kill little Braileiph but destroy the whole gerbel village.

He came to the village and with the swing of his shear, the roofs of houses went flying. Their carrot and potatoes gardens destroyed. Then the gerbels arrived. They saw a huge human taking swings at their lives. They could only do one thing. Only one thing to do, fight back. They got their swords (pins) and sheilds( a glass box) and charged at him. He saw them coming and laughed. I mean he fell down and was crying laughing. The gerbils used this to an advantage and poked him liked he was never poked befors

Although that didn't stop the farmer. He got up quickly and charged at the most sacred part of their village. The big onion. It is their sacred thing. They believe onions are gods and the will die to protect their gods. He swung with his shear and chopped the top off clean.  "AAÀAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAQQAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAgagaAAAAAAAA"
All the gerbels screamed. "Youhoo." Someone said. Everyone turned their head. It was the late farmers wife.

He turned and saw her. His eyes gleamed with suprisingness. The gerbils couldn't look. To a gerbil the uglier we see that person, the more beautiful they are to them. He ran to her and slapped her. Then came back and attacked the gerbils. He ran down and jumped at them. He stuck the landing, then fell in a hole. You see so while the farmer was slapping the lady had dug a hole. Then they covered the whole in grass. It was a good idea, they got very smart. And it turned out the farmer was not the brightest lightbulb in the collection. That did not make any sense, oh well. Huh I'm talking really slowly but it is coming out correctly instead of how it use to come out when it had a bunch of typos wait wait wait I'm going off task from the story. Anyway the chapter just fish the farmer was in the hole and all he had on his mind was it a big big BIG revenge.
He gerbils decided go back to their village. Well the remaining bits of their village. The gerbils are smart but they thought that the war was over. They thought the human farmer would not Try to attack there village. Only Bralieph thought that the farmer would look for revenge.  He yelled " I  am sure that the farmer  will come back.  Humans always want revenge!" The  other gerbils just laughed.

Despite this true and thourogh warning that our fellow gerbil has given they refuse to listen. So our gerbil decides to go to other villages. Because maybe other villages will listen. He goes to the next, which is 20 miles. 40 could just drive there in 40 24 hour of time. For 20 miles is like driving to Tennessee. Well like walking 2 Tennessee. He is a mile in and nightfall is upon him. He is in what they call A cold zone. Gerbils can not survive in the cold zone.

He was in deep trouble. The closest was out of the cold zone was 2 miles. Remember, 2 miles is a lot longer of a way for a gerbil than us. He had about 20 min to get out of there before the sun went down. He ran and I mean ran,as fast as his little legs could carry him. He saw the sun go down, the end was at its near for young Bralieph, at least he thought.

He felt his body freeze and soon passed out. He was on the ground sideways and if you saw him you'd think he was dead. 10 hours later he woke up covered in twigs and dirt. He was alive. How? He went outside and saw the farmers wife on the ground, sleeping. He knew she saved his life and that he has to do his mission. He continued traveling until he got to the purple people eaters tribe, where he was captured and taken to jail immediately.

"Get in there now you fool!" The prison guard yelled as Bralieph was pushed violently into the cell. Being smart and witty he slammed his head at the spiked twig prison wall. It was bleeding and if he didn't get attention 5 min. he would die. Knowing they had to keep him alive they brought him to their doctor (which is best in the gerbil world) and he fixed him. As he walked back with just the doctor he stopped. He stared at the doctor like he was a freak. Out of no where WHACK went his little gerbil arm and off he went. He ran and ran and ran. Then when he couldn't run no more he stopped, and was beat up.

AHW gerbil

He was a good man, you could say. Except he wasn't a man at all. He was a GERBIL. A gerbil that lead gerbils out of extinction. He was just a little theif. He didn't think k of it as theivery. He thought of it as well survival. He stole from the humans who tried to kill him. One day he got tired. He was bored and his parents were away fighting against the next tribe, the purple people eaters. No they aren't really purple and they don't eat people.  Thy just are weird. The farmer was out harvesting crops. It was his last chance to get food. He wasn't going to miss it for anything. He dashed up the hill to the farm and saw something beautiful.

It wasn't like anything he'd ever seen before. It was an onion. Onions are more sacred than candy. Imagine your favorite candy. Then if you multiplied how much you love it by 2 then maybe, MAYBE, you would love it as much as a gerbel loved an onion. He dashed at it. He didn't even try to be sneaky. He made so much noise, the farmer heard him. He didn't notice that though. The farmers back in the day didn't have shoes. They weren't like that. Man, get on their level. He tried to block the onion with his foot. The gerbel was already in the air. BTW's the gerbels name is Bralieph.

Bralieph bit into what he thought was the onion but the taste tasted terrible. I mean really bad. Like eating a foot bad. That's because he bit into the farmers foot. The farmer exclaimed "mnjlbjnohngujhkbjbjb!" That's what the verbal heard. Gerbels don't speak English,they speak gerban. He fell back hard. The farmer had a shear and was ready to kill him. He knew his doom was near.

He crunched so hard you could almost hear his bone crack. The farmer took his shear and saw the little useless geebel just lying on the ground. Braileiph tried to play dead but the farmer was too smart for that. The farmer grunted as he was about to kill this little guy. But instead of death which Braileiph thought was going to happen, he was flying. Not like superman but he couldn't control himself. He landed hard at the bottom of the hill. The farmer yelled "AÀAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH! YOU LITTLE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!" He was not happy. The farmer turned and dashed down the mountain to not just kill little Braileiph but destroy the whole gerbel village.

He came to the village and with the swing of his shear, the roofs of houses went flying. Their carrot and potatoes gardens destroyed. Then the gerbels arrived. They saw a huge human taking swings at their lives. They could only do one thing. Only one thing to do, fight back. They got their swords (pins) and sheilds( a glass box) and charged at him. He saw them coming and laughed. I mean he fell down and was crying laughing. The gerbils used this to an advantage and poked him liked he was never poked befors

Although that didn't stop the farmer. He got up quickly and charged at the most sacred part of their village. The big onion. It is their sacred thing. They believe onions are gods and the will die to protect their gods. He swung with his shear and chopped the top off clean.  "AAÀAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAQQAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAgagaAAAAAAAA"
All the gerbels screamed. "Youhoo." Someone said. Everyone turned their head. It was the late farmers wife.

He turned and saw her. His eyes gleamed with suprisingness. The gerbils couldn't look. To a gerbil the uglier we see that person, the more beautiful they are to them. He ran to her and slapped her. Then came back and attacked the gerbils. He ran down and jumped at them. He stuck the landing, then fell in a hole. You see so while the farmer was slapping the lady had dug a hole. Then they covered the whole in grass. It was a good idea, they got very smart. And it turned out the farmer was not the brightest lightbulb in the collection. That did not make any sense, oh well. Huh I'm talking really slowly but it is coming out correctly instead of how it use to come out when it had a bunch of typos wait wait wait I'm going off task from the story. Anyway the chapter just fish the farmer was in the hole and all he had on his mind was it a big big BIG revenge.
He gerbils decided go back to their village. Well the remaining bits of their village. The gerbils are smart but they thought that the war was over. They thought the human farmer would not Try to attack there village. Only Bralieph thought that the farmer would look for revenge.  He yelled " I  am sure that the farmer  will come back.  Humans always want revenge!" The  other gerbils just laughed.

Despite this true and thourogh warning that our fellow gerbil has given they refuse to listen. So our gerbil decides to go to other villages. Because maybe other villages will listen. He goes to the next, which is 20 miles. 40 could just drive there in 40 24 hour of time. For 20 miles is like driving to Tennessee. Well like walking 2 Tennessee. He is a mile in and nightfall is upon him. He is in what they call A cold zone. Gerbils can not survive in the cold zone.

He was in deep trouble. The closest was out of the cold zone was 2 miles. Remember, 2 miles is a lot longer of a way for a gerbil than us. He had about 20 min to get out of there before the sun went down. He ran and I mean ran,as fast as his little legs could carry him. He saw the sun go down, the end was at its near for young Bralieph, at least he thought.

He felt his body freeze and soon passed out. He was on the ground sideways and if you saw him you'd think he was dead. 10 hours later he woke up covered in twigs and dirt. He was alive. How? He went outside and saw the farmers wife on the ground, sleeping. He knew she saved his life and that he has to do his mission. He continued traveling until he got to the purple people eaters tribe, where he was captured and taken to jail immediately.

AHW

I like Spanish. I like Spanish class, I want to speak it fluently. I just like Spanish in general. Just had to get that out there. I was thinking what would happen if rap artists like Eminem and little Wayne sang songs slowly. A slow version of Not Afraid would be weird. Tommorow I will continue to write Gerbil. We will catch up with Braileiph.
Estoy firmemente a tiempo para escribir de nuevo mañana. (If you don't know what the means ask Marc. He should know)

AHW PART 4 IS SOCIETY SEXIST

This is just a closing peice. The last section of this interesting piece. Oh, before I forget the guy who had the response (in the first section) he got that from a commercial apparently. I dont believe it but who knows. Anyway I just don't understand. Why is this happening, my hypothesis is that girls are starting to be treated more like objects than humans. Really, a lot of people just want a girl so they can see them naked or something. That's just how it is. I don't believe in that, my friends don't believe in that, but most of the world does. Girls aren't treated like people, who have a heart and a say, but like objects, to play with and look at. So this is it.

AHW is society sexist part 3.

Well this is part three and its about time. Spending time with the other person. A lot of break-ups happen because well " he doesnt spend enough time with me" or vis virsa. OK while this might be true, most of the time it isn't. If the guy says no to going to the mall or something consider this, has he ditched his buddies to hang out with you before, has he bought hundreds of dollars worth of things last time and most importantly GUYS DONT(and this is generally speaking) LIKE SHOPPING! The guy might rather have you play some video games with him or some sport. Remember this is a guys point of view. I don't know how you girls think but that is how we think.

AHW is society sexist part 2 3/6

If you didn't read part 1 yet you should read that first. Anyway what the person said is very interesting. But I don't think it is true. The view point of "hot" is just changing. In that sense really sure ladies are getting hotter, but so are some boys. At first I thought it might of been more fair when society was also sexist back when girls couldn't vote and stuff. Then I realized that it would out weigh the ways that we have to do more. But still some more reasons I will rant. Why do we have to pay for dinner but girls never have to? Or why do we have to buy presents only to get a free hug. There will be a part 3.

AHW is society sexist, part 1

Ok, hi taking a break from durable. Hi I need 2 go through my creative craft. Hi was watching a YouTube video yesterday and it made me think about something. Our society today is sort of sexist. Why is it that the man has 2 open the door, and the woman doesn't have to? Also why does the guy have 2 risk rejection and ask the girls out. These are just 2 examples of Waze that are Society is Feist towards girls. I told someone about this, and person ask me not to use their name. So I will call this person Bob. Stop said " this is because girls are getting hotter and hotter. Guys are not keeping up. Guys will do anything 2 get A girl."

Essay pre test thing

I am writing about basketball. Basketball is a sport that consists of two hoops each ten feet high,and a ball. You have to bounce the ball or dribble when you move. You shoot the basketball and try to get it in the rim with people trying to stop you. Each team has 5 people. A point guard or a floor general. A shooting guard a lot of times the scorer. The small forward, he does the spots

 that's

 too small for a forward but too big for a guard. A power forward, the guy who plays big. He and the center get down and dirty. The center is the big guy. He takes the tip and is bigger than everyone else. Whoever has the most points at the end of the game wins.

Basketball has a very interesting origin. It was created by Dr. James Naismith. It started off as a basket where you throw peaches in. Then the problem of getting the peaches down had arisen. So they put up a net instead of the bottom of the basket. It evolved later into the great sport we know.

Basketball has some interesting rules. It has the simple and obvious rules like fouls and out of bounds. Also the traveling rule. You must bounce the ball while moving. But some interesting rules like backcourt violation. You can't go back across half court once you pass it.

The most evolved version of basketball. The NBA or the National Basketball Assoscioation is the biggest basketball league. It is easiely in the top four leagues in USA. It has 30 teams, all but one are in the USA. It has shown great players like Michael Jordan up to now LeBron James. It is a spectacle to watch.

Basketball is amazing. Basketball was just a basket and a peach that soon grew to be one of the worlds favorite games. It has unique rules while not forgetting the obvious. It has shown some of the greatest athletes in the world. Basketball is a great sport.

Gerbil thing AHW

He was a good man, you could say. Except he wasn't a man at all. He was a GERBIL. A gerbil that lead gerbils out of extinction. He was just a little theif. He didn't think k of it as theivery. He thought of it as well survival. He stole from the humans who tried to kill him. One day he got tired. He was bored and his parents were away fighting against the next tribe, the purple people eaters. No they aren't really purple and they don't eat people.  Thy just are weird. The farmer was out harvesting crops. It was his last chance to get food. He wasn't going to miss it for anything. He dashed up the hill to the farm and saw something beautiful.

It wasn't like anything he'd ever seen before. It was an onion. Onions are more sacred than candy. Imagine your favorite candy. Then if you multiplied how much you love it by 2 then maybe, MAYBE, you would love it as much as a gerbel loved an onion. He dashed at it. He didn't even try to be sneaky. He made so much noise, the farmer heard him. He didn't notice that though. The farmers back in the day didn't have shoes. They weren't like that. Man, get on their level. He tried to block the onion with his foot. The gerbel was already in the air. BTW's the gerbels name is Bralieph.

Bralieph bit into what he thought was the onion but the taste tasted terrible. I mean really bad. Like eating a foot bad. That's because he bit into the farmers foot. The farmer exclaimed "mnjlbjnohngujhkbjbjb!" That's what the verbal heard. Gerbels don't speak English,they speak gerban. He fell back hard. The farmer had a shear and was ready to kill him. He knew his doom was near.

He crunched so hard you could almost hear his bone crack. The farmer took his shear and saw the little useless geebel just lying on the ground. Braileiph tried to play dead but the farmer was too smart for that. The farmer grunted as he was about to kill this little guy. But instead of death which Braileiph thought was going to happen, he was flying. Not like superman but he couldn't control himself. He landed hard at the bottom of the hill. The farmer yelled "AÀAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH! YOU LITTLE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!" He was not happy. The farmer turned and dashed down the mountain to not just kill little Braileiph but destroy the whole gerbel village.

He came to the village and with the swing of his shear, the roofs of houses went flying. Their carrot and potatoes gardens destroyed. Then the gerbels arrived. They saw a huge human taking swings at their lives. They could only do one thing. Only one thing to do, fight back. They got their swords (pins) and sheilds( a glass box) and charged at him. He saw them coming and laughed. I mean he fell down and was crying laughing. The gerbils used this to an advantage and poked him liked he was never poked befors

Although that didn't stop the farmer. He got up quickly and charged at the most sacred part of their village. The big onion. It is their sacred thing. They believe onions are gods and the will die to protect their gods. He swung with his shear and chopped the top off clean.  "AAÀAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAQQAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAgagaAAAAAAAA"
All the gerbels screamed. "Youhoo." Someone said. Everyone turned their head. It was the late farmers wife.

He turned and saw her. His eyes gleamed with suprisingness. The gerbils couldn't look. To a gerbil the uglier we see that person, the more beautiful they are to them. He ran to her and slapped her. Then came back and attacked the gerbils. He ran down and jumped at them. He stuck the landing, then fell in a hole. You see so while the farmer was slapping the lady had dug a hole. Then they covered the whole in grass. It was a good idea, they got very smart. And it turned out the farmer was not the brightest lightbulb in the collection. That did not make any sense, oh well. Huh I'm talking really slowly but it is coming out correctly instead of how it use to come out when it had a bunch of typos wait wait wait I'm going off task from the story. Anyway the chapter just fish the farmer was in the hole and all he had on his mind was it a big big BIG revenge.
He gerbils decided go back to their village. Well the remaining bits of their village. The gerbils are smart but they thought that the war was over. They thought the human farmer would not Try to attack there village. Only Bralieph thought that the farmer would look for revenge.  He yelled " I  am sure that the farmer  will come back.  Humans always want revenge!" The  other gerbils just laughed.

Despite this true and thourogh warning that our fellow gerbil has given they refuse to listen. So our gerbil decides to go to other villages. Because maybe other villages will listen. He goes to the next, which is 20 miles. 40 could just drive there in 40 24 hour of time. For 20 miles is like driving to Tennessee. Well like walking 2 Tennessee. He is a mile in and nightfall is upon him. He is in what they call A cold zone. Gerbils can not survive in the cold zone.

He was in deep trouble. The closest was out of the cold zone was 2 miles. Remember, 2 miles is a lot longer of a way for a gerbil than us. He had about 20 min to get out of there before the sun went down. He ran and I mean ran,as fast as his little legs could carry him. He saw the sun go down, the end was at its near for young Bralieph, at least he thought,

Gerbil not done

He was a good man, you could say. Except he wasn't a man at all. He was a GERBEL. A gerbel that lead gerbelsmout of extinction. He was just a little theif. He didn't think k of it as theivery. He thought of it as well survival. He stole from the humans who tried to kill him. One day he got tired. He was bored and his parents were away fighting against the next tribe, the purple people eaters. No they aren't really purple and they don't eat people.  Thy just are weird. The farmer was out harvesting crops. It was his last chance to get food. He wasn't going to miss it for anything. He dashed up the hill to the farm and saw something beautiful.

It wasn't like anything he'd ever seen before. It was an onion. Onions are more sacred than candy. Imagine your favorite candy. Then if you multiplied how much you love it by 2 then maybe, MAYBE, you would love it as much as a gerbel loved an onion. He dashed at it. He didn't even try to be sneaky. He made so much noise, the farmer heard him. He didn't notice that though. The farmers back in the day didn't have shoes. They weren't like that. Man, get on their level. He tried to block the onion with his foot. The gerbel was already in the air. BTW's the gerbels name is Bralieph.

Ralieph bit into what he thought was the onion but the taste tasted terrible. I mean really bad. Like eating a foot bad. That's because he bit into the farmers foot. The farmer exclaimed "mnjlbjnohngujhkbjbjb!" That's what the verbal heard. Gerbels don't speak English,they speak gerban. He fell back hard. The farmer had a shear and was ready to kill him. He knew his doom was near.

He crunched so hard you could almost hear his bone crack. The farmer took his shear and saw the little useless geebel just lying on the ground. Braileiph tried to play dead but the farmer was too smart for that. The farmer grunted as he was about to kill this little guy. But instead of death which Braileiph thought was going to happen, he was flying. Not like superman but he couldn't control himself. He landed hard at the bottom of the hill. The farmer yelled "AÀAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH! YOU LITTLE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!" He was not happy. The farmer turned and dashed down the mountain to not just kill little Braileiph but destroy the whole gerbel village.

He came to the village and with the swing of his shear, the roofs of houses went flying. Their carrot and potatoes gardens destroyed. Then the gerbels arrived. They saw a huge human taking swings at their lives. They could only do one thing. Only one thing to do, fight back. They got their swords (pins) and sheilds( a glass box) and charged at him. He saw them coming and laughed. I mean he fell down and was crying laughing. The gerbils used this to an advantage and poked him liked he was never poked befors

Although that didn't stop the farmer. He got up quickly and charged at the most sacred part of their village. The big onion. It is their sacred thing. They believe onions are gods and the will die to protect their gods. He swung with his shear and chopped the top off clean.  "AAÀAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAQQAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAgagaAAAAAAAA"
All the gerbels screamed. "Youhoo." Someone said. Everyone turned their head. It was the late farmers wife.

He turned and saw her. His eyes gleamed with suprisingness. The gerbils couldn't look. To a gerbil the uglier we see that person, the more beautiful they are to them. He ran to her and slapped her. Then came back and attacked the gerbils. He ran down and jumped at them. He stuck the landing, then fell in a hole. You see so while the farmer was slapping the lady had dug a hole. Then they covered the whole in grass. It was a good idea, they got very smart. And it turned out the farmer was not the brightest lightbulb in the collection. That did not make any sense, oh well. Huh I'm talking really slowly but it is coming out correctly instead of how it use to come out when it had a bunch of typos wait wait wait I'm going off task from the story. Anyway the chapter just fish the farmer was in the hole and all he had on his mind was it a big big BIG revenge.
He gerbils decided go back to their village. Well the remaining bits of their village. The gerbils are smart but they thought that the war was over. They thought the human farmer would not Try to attack there village. Only Bralieph thought that the farmer would look for revenge.  He yelled " I  am sure that the farmer  will come back.  Humans always want revenge!" The  other gerbils just laughed.

Despite this true and thourogh warning that our fellow gerbil has given they refuse to listen. So our gerbil decides to go to other villages. Because maybe other villages will listen. He goes to the next, which is 20 miles. 40 could just drive there in 40 24 hour of time. For 20 miles is like driving to Tennessee. Well like walking 2 Tennessee. He is a mile in and nightfall is upon him. He is in what they call A cold zone. Gerbils can not survive in the cold zone.

Next gerbil part

He was a good man, you could say. Except he wasn't a man at all. He was a GERBEL. A gerbel that lead gerbelsmout of extinction. He was just a little theif. He didn't think k of it as theivery. He thought of it as well survival. He stole from the humans who tried to kill him. One day he got tired. He was bored and his parents were away fighting against the next tribe, the purple people eaters. No they aren't really purple and they don't eat people.  Thy just are weird. The farmer was out harvesting crops. It was his last chance to get food. He wasn't going to miss it for anything. He dashed up the hill to the farm and saw something beautiful.

It wasn't like anything he'd ever seen before. It was an onion. Onions are more sacred than candy. Imagine your favorite candy. Then if you multiplied how much you love it by 2 then maybe, MAYBE, you would love it as much as a gerbel loved an onion. He dashed at it. He didn't even try to be sneaky. He made so much noise, the farmer heard him. He didn't notice that though. The farmers back in the day didn't have shoes. They weren't like that. Man, get on their level. He tried to block the onion with his foot. The gerbel was already in the air. BTW's the gerbels name is Bralieph.

Ralieph bit into what he thought was the onion but the taste tasted terrible. I mean really bad. Like eating a foot bad. That's because he bit into the farmers foot. The farmer exclaimed "mnjlbjnohngujhkbjbjb!" That's what the verbal heard. Gerbels don't speak English,they speak gerban. He fell back hard. The farmer had a shear and was ready to kill him. He knew his doom was near.

He crunched so hard you could almost hear his bone crack. The farmer took his shear and saw the little useless geebel just lying on the ground. Braileiph tried to play dead but the farmer was too smart for that. The farmer grunted as he was about to kill this little guy. But instead of death which Braileiph thought was going to happen, he was flying. Not like superman but he couldn't control himself. He landed hard at the bottom of the hill. The farmer yelled "AÀAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH! YOU LITTLE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!" He was not happy. The farmer turned and dashed down the mountain to not just kill little Braileiph but destroy the whole gerbel village.

He came to the village and with the swing of his shear, the roofs of houses went flying. Their carrot and potatoes gardens destroyed. Then the gerbels arrived. They saw a huge human taking swings at their lives. They could only do one thing. Only one thing to do, fight back. They got their swords (pins) and sheilds( a glass box) and charged at him. He saw them coming and laughed. I mean he fell down and was crying laughing. The gerbils used this to an advantage and poked him liked he was never poked befors

Although that didn't stop the farmer. He got up quickly and charged at the most sacred part of their village. The big onion. It is their sacred thing. They believe onions are gods and the will die to protect their gods. He swung with his shear and chopped the top off clean.  "AAÀAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAQQAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAgagaAAAAAAAA"
All the gerbels screamed. "Youhoo." Someone said. Everyone turned their head. It was the late farmers wife.

He turned and saw her. His eyes gleamed with suprisingness. The gerbils couldn't look. To a gerbil the uglier we see that person, the more beautiful they are to them. He ran to her and slapped her. Then came back and attacked the gerbils. He ran down and jumped at them. He stuck the landing, then fell in a hole. You see so while the farmer was slapping the lady had dug a hole. Then they covered the whole in grass. It was a good idea, they got very smart. And it turned out the farmer was not the brightest lightbulb in the collection. That did not make any sense, oh well. Huh I'm talking really slowly but it is coming out correctly instead of how it use to come out when it had a bunch of typos wait wait wait I'm going off task from the story. Anyway the chapter just fish the farmer was in the hole and all he had on his mind was it a big big BIG revenge.
He gerbils decided go back to their village. Well the remaining bits of their village. The gerbils are smart but they thought that the war was over. They thought the human farmer would not Try to attack there village. Only Bralieph thought that the farmer would look for revenge.  He yelled " I  am sure that the farmer  will come back.  Humans always want revenge!" The  other gerbils just laughed.

Gerbil part something

He was a good man, you could say. Except he wasn't a man at all. He was a GERBEL. A gerbel that lead gerbelsmout of extinction. He was just a little theif. He didn't think k of it as theivery. He thought of it as well survival. He stole from the humans who tried to kill him. One day he got tired. He was bored and his parents were away fighting against the next tribe, the purple people eaters. No they aren't really purple and they don't eat people.  Thy just are weird. The farmer was out harvesting crops. It was his last chance to get food. He wasn't going to miss it for anything. He dashed up the hill to the farm and saw something beautiful.

It wasn't like anything he'd ever seen before. It was an onion. Onions are more sacred than candy. Imagine your favorite candy. Then if you multiplied how much you love it by 2 then maybe, MAYBE, you would love it as much as a gerbel loved an onion. He dashed at it. He didn't even try to be sneaky. He made so much noise, the farmer heard him. He didn't notice that though. The farmers back in the day didn't have shoes. They weren't like that. Man, get on their level. He tried to block the onion with his foot. The gerbel was already in the air. BTW's the gerbels name is Bralieph.

Ralieph bit into what he thought was the onion but the taste tasted terrible. I mean really bad. Like eating a foot bad. That's because he bit into the farmers foot. The farmer exclaimed "mnjlbjnohngujhkbjbjb!" That's what the verbal heard. Gerbels don't speak English,they speak gerban. He fell back hard. The farmer had a shear and was ready to kill him. He knew his doom was near.

He crunched so hard you could almost hear his bone crack. The farmer took his shear and saw the little useless geebel just lying on the ground. Braileiph tried to play dead but the farmer was too smart for that. The farmer grunted as he was about to kill this little guy. But instead of death which Braileiph thought was going to happen, he was flying. Not like superman but he couldn't control himself. He landed hard at the bottom of the hill. The farmer yelled "AÀAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH! YOU LITTLE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!" He was not happy. The farmer turned and dashed down the mountain to not just kill little Braileiph but destroy the whole gerbel village.

He came to the village and with the swing of his shear, the roofs of houses went flying. Their carrot and potatoes gardens destroyed. Then the gerbels arrived. They saw a huge human taking swings at their lives. They could only do one thing. Only one thing to do, fight back. They got their swords (pins) and sheilds( a glass box) and charged at him. He saw them coming and laughed. I mean he fell down and was crying laughing. The gerbils used this to an advantage and poked him liked he was never poked befors

Although that didn't stop the farmer. He got up quickly and charged at the most sacred part of their village. The big onion. It is their sacred thing. They believe onions are gods and the will die to protect their gods. He swung with his shear and chopped the top off clean.  "AAÀAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAQQAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAgagaAAAAAAAA"
All the gerbels screamed. "Youhoo." Someone said. Everyone turned their head. It was the late farmers wife.

He turned and saw her. His eyes gleamed with suprisingness. The gerbils couldn't look. To a gerbil the uglier we see that person, the more beautiful they are to them. He ran to her and slapped her. Then came back and attacked the gerbils. He ran down and jumped at them. He stuck the landing, then fell in a hole. You see so while the farmer was slapping the lady had dug a hole. Then they covered the whole in grass. It was a good idea, they got very smart. And it turned out the farmer was not the brightest lightbulb in the collection. That did not make any sense, oh well. Huh I'm talking really slowly but it is coming out correctly instead of how it use to come out when it had a bunch of typos wait wait wait I'm going off task from the story. Anyway the chapter just fish the farmer was in the hole and all he had on his mind was it a big big BIG revenge.

Mentor txt one parts

1. Introduce yourself
2. Introduce the problem
3. Show the example
4. Give a follow up example
5. What you want and why
6. Ending
Beginning claim evidence conclusion, address date cc reasons name problem paragraph formatting middle end and title  personal experience facts return address inside address solution details salutations, Taddle, Iscore

AHW

I'm taking A  break from gerbil to think about  what should happen next.  So I will write about my weekend or. something.  Wait  but first I will just say thanks to all of those who tote for me sand helped me win the JBOW award.  Thanks tonal of you who voted. On Monday babysat my neighbors.  Tuesday I forgot.  Wednesday I went to  Somerset and bought nba2k 14. Thursday I went to chipotle.  Friday i  went to my grandma's house.  And  yesterday my cousin  came over to my house.  Time is up. Goodbye.

Gerbel part 6

He was a good man, you could say. Except he wasn't a man at all. He was a GERBEL. A gerbel that lead gerbelsmout of extinction. He was just a little theif. He didn't think k of it as theivery. He thought of it as well survival. He stole from the humans who tried to kill him. One day he got tired. He was bored and his parents were away fighting against the next tribe, the purple people eaters. No they aren't really purple and they don't eat people.  Thy just are weird. The farmer was out harvesting crops. It was his last chance to get food. He wasn't going to miss it for anything. He dashed up the hill to the farm and saw something beautiful.

It wasn't like anything he'd ever seen before. It was an onion. Onions are more sacred than candy. Imagine your favorite candy. Then if you multiplied how much you love it by 2 then maybe, MAYBE, you would love it as much as a gerbel loved an onion. He dashed at it. He didn't even try to be sneaky. He made so much noise, the farmer heard him. He didn't notice that though. The farmers back in the day didn't have shoes. They weren't like that. Man, get on their level. He tried to block the onion with his foot. The gerbel was already in the air. BTW's the gerbels name is Bralieph.

Ralieph bit into what he thought was the onion but the taste tasted terrible. I mean really bad. Like eating a foot bad. That's because he bit into the farmers foot. The farmer exclaimed "mnjlbjnohngujhkbjbjb!" That's what the verbal heard. Gerbels don't speak English,they speak gerban. He fell back hard. The farmer had a shear and was ready to kill him. He knew his doom was near.

He crunched so hard you could almost hear his bone crack. The farmer took his shear and saw the little useless geebel just lying on the ground. Braileiph tried to play dead but the farmer was too smart for that. The farmer grunted as he was about to kill this little guy. But instead of death which Braileiph thought was going to happen, he was flying. Not like superman but he couldn't control himself. He landed hard at the bottom of the hill. The farmer yelled "AÀAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH! YOU LITTLE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!" He was not happy. The farmer turned and dashed down the mountain to not just kill little Braileiph but destroy the whole gerbel village.

He came to the village and with the swing of his shear, the roofs of houses went flying. Their carrot and potatoes gardens destroyed. Then the gerbels arrived. They saw a huge human taking swings at their lives. They could only do one thing. Only one thing to do, fight back. They got their swords (pins) and sheilds( a glass box) and charged at him. He saw them coming and laughed. I mean he fell down and was crying laughing. The gerbils used this to an advantage and poked him liked he was never poked befors

Although that didn't stop the farmer. He got up quickly and charged at the most sacred part of their village. The big onion. It is their sacred thing. They believe onions are gods and the will die to protect their gods. He swung with his shear and chopped the top off clean.  "AAÀAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAQQAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAgagaAAAAAAAA"
All the gerbels screamed. "Youhoo." Someone said. Everyone turned their head. It was the late farmers wife.

Valentines day poem

New valentines day poem

Love is patient
Love is kind

You are patient

When sis and I fight
You stop the problems quickly
Not choosing a side
Except the side of justice
You are patient yes

You are kind

When you go to work
With idiotic people
Showing them the way
And helping them to their goals
You are very kind

Love is patient
Love is kind,

You are love Mom,

You are love.

My video

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=VgWAtoUoKGo

Gerbil Part 5

He was a good man, you could say. Except he wasn't a man at all. He was a GERBEL. A gerbel that lead gerbelsmout of extinction. He was just a little theif. He didn't think k of it as theivery. He thought of it as well survival. He stole from the humans who tried to kill him. One day he got tired. He was bored and his parents were away fighting against the next tribe, the purple people eaters. No they aren't really purple and they don't eat people.  Thy just are weird. The farmer was out harvesting crops. It was his last chance to get food. He wasn't going to miss it for anything. He dashed up the hill to the farm and saw something beautiful.

It wasn't like anything he'd ever seen before. It was an onion. Onions are more sacred than candy. Imagine your favorite candy. Then if you multiplied how much you love it by 2 then maybe, MAYBE, you would love it as much as a gerbel loved an onion. He dashed at it. He didn't even try to be sneaky. He made so much noise, the farmer heard him. He didn't notice that though. The farmers back in the day didn't have shoes. They weren't like that. Man, get on their level. He tried to block the onion with his foot. The gerbel was already in the air. BTW's the gerbels name is Bralieph.

Ralieph bit into what he thought was the onion but the taste tasted terrible. I mean really bad. Like eating a foot bad. That's because he bit into the farmers foot. The farmer exclaimed "mnjlbjnohngujhkbjbjb!" That's what the verbal heard. Gerbels don't speak English,they speak gerban. He fell back hard. The farmer had a shear and was ready to kill him. He knew his doom was near.

He crunched so hard you could almost hear his bone crack. The farmer took his shear and saw the little useless geebel just lying on the ground. Braileiph tried to play dead but the farmer was too smart for that. The farmer grunted as he was about to kill this little guy. But instead of death which Braileiph thought was going to happen, he was flying. Not like superman but he couldn't control himself. He landed hard at the bottom of the hill. The farmer yelled "AÀAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH! YOU LITTLE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!" He was not happy. The farmer turned and dashed down the mountain to not just kill little Braileiph but destroy the whole gerbel village.

He came to the village and with the swing of his shear, the roofs of houses went flying. Their carrot and potatoes gardens destroyed. Then the gerbels arrived. They saw a huge human taking swings at their lives. They could only do one thing. Only one thing to do, fight back. They got their swords (pins) and sheilds( a glass box) and charged at him. He saw them coming and laughed. I mean he fell down and was crying laughing. The gerbils used this to an advantage and poked him liked he was never poked befors

Gerbel part 4

He was a good man, you could say. Except he wasn't a man at all. He was a GERBEL. A gerbel that lead gerbelsmout of extinction. He was just a little theif. He didn't think k of it as theivery. He thought of it as well survival. He stole from the humans who tried to kill him. One day he got tired. He was bored and his parents were away fighting against the next tribe, the purple people eaters. No they aren't really purple and they don't eat people.  Thy just are weird. The farmer was out harvesting crops. It was his last chance to get food. He wasn't going to miss it for anything. He dashed up the hill to the farm and saw something beautiful.

It wasn't like anything he'd ever seen before. It was an onion. Onions are more sacred than candy. Imagine your favorite candy. Then if you multiplied how much you love it by 2 then maybe, MAYBE, you would love it as much as a gerbel loved an onion. He dashed at it. He didn't even try to be sneaky. He made so much noise, the farmer heard him. He didn't notice that though. The farmers back in the day didn't have shoes. They weren't like that. Man, get on their level. He tried to block the onion with his foot. The gerbel was already in the air. BTW's the gerbels name is Bralieph.

Ralieph bit into what he thought was the onion but the taste tasted terrible. I mean really bad. Like eating a foot bad. That's because he bit into the farmers foot. The farmer exclaimed "mnjlbjnohngujhkbjbjb!" That's what the verbal heard. Gerbels don't speak English,they speak gerban. He fell back hard. The farmer had a shear and was ready to kill him. He knew his doom was near.

He crunched so hard you could almost hear his bone crack. The farmer took his shear and saw the little useless geebel just lying on the ground. Braileiph tried to play dead but the farmer was too smart for that. The farmer grunted as he was about to kill this little guy. But instead of death which Braileiph thought was going to happen, he was flying. Not like superman but he couldn't control himself. He landed hard at the bottom of the hill. The farmer yelled "AÀAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH! YOU LITTLE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!" He was not happy. The farmer turned and dashed down the mountain to not just kill little Braileiph but destroy the whole gerbel village.

Gerbel Part 3

Ralieph bit into what he thought was the onion but the taste tasted terrible. I mean really bad. Like eating a foot bad. That's because he bit into the farmers foot. The farmer exclaimed "mnjlbjnohngujhkbjbjb!" That's what the verbal heard. Gerbels don't speak English,they speak gerban. He fell back hard. The farmer had a shear and was ready to kill him. He knew his doom was near.

Gerbel part 2

He was a good man, you could say. Except he wasn't a man at all. He was a GERBEL. A gerbel that lead gerbelsmout of extinction. He was just a little theif. He didn't think k of it as theivery. He thought of it as well survival. He stole from the humans who tried to kill him. One day he got tired. He was bored and his parents were away fighting against the next tribe, the purple people eaters. No they aren't really purple and they don't eat people.  Thy just are weird. The farmer was out harvesting crops. It was his last chance to get food. He wasn't going to miss it for anything. He dashed up the hill to the farm and saw something beautiful.

It wasn't like anything he'd ever seen before. It was an onion. Onions are more sacred than candy. Imagine your favorite candy. Then if you multiplied how much you love it by 2 then maybe, MAYBE, you would love it as much as a gerbel loved an onion. He dashed at it. He didn't even try to be sneaky. He made so much noise, the farmer heard him. He didn't notice that though. The farmers back in the day didn't have shoes. They weren't like that. Man, get on their level. He tried to block the onion with his foot. The gerbel was already in the air. BTW's the gerbels name is Bralieph.

AHW for friday,THE GERBIL

He was a good man, you could say. Except he wasn't a man at all. He was a GERBEL. A gerbel that lead gerbelsmout of extinction. He was just a little theif. He didn't think k of it as theivery. He thought of it as well survival. He stole from the humans who tried to kill him. One day he got tired. He was bored and his parents were away fighting against the next tribe, the purple people eaters. No they aren't really purple and they don't eat people.  Thy just are weird. The farmer was out harvesting crops. It was his last chance to get food. He wasn't going to miss it for anything. He dashed up the hill to the farm and saw something beautiful.

AHW

My friend kyle just found out that marvel is making an ant man movie. That's just sad. Really just sad. On another note this is 9:00 on 1.31.14 but I'm writing it anyway. So yeah. I just had a conference with Mr. Joe. I found out there is a way to put ads on my blog and earn money. I'm gonna do it when I get home. This will be fun. I mean FUN.
Its fun friday. bye

AHW

Well this is the first time I'm writing in drive. It has more features cause its connected to the internet like  this font called Ubuntu or syncopate. Also it was Brianna's birthday Saturday. Yep her sweet 16. Yay. It was a murder mystery party. I was an investigator. Also in the comment section write what date you think I wrote this.  Thank you

1.31.14

I wrote a lot of AHW

AHW

Well even though Im writing this at 9:03 am on 1.29.14, this is AHW for 1.30.14. Yeah I'm writing it early but I don't care. I finished writing tonights and so I'm doing tomorrow's. I'm hooked on a TV show called Leverage. Its basicly a team of modern robin hoods. Lead by Nathan Ford. He's a drunk ex-insurance employee. The insurance he worked for killed his son. Sophie Deverough is a grifter. Basicly someone who gets information from them by talking. She's also the europerian one. Then Elliot Spencer, he's the retrieval specialist and the fighter. Also he's the guy that there is more to him that meets the eye. Then parker. She's the theif and has the very weird background and childhood. No one no's much about them. Then my favorite one is Alec Harrison. He's the geek. He also is the computer dude. Nathan and Sophie are going to be together soon if not already. And Harrison and Parker are probably going to be together if not already. They were all criminals and break the law to help others except nathan. As they call it picking up where the law leaves off. You should watch it.

1.30.14

We did R&E's today

Argument Paragraph checked by cory

Students in Michigan should not go to year round schools because they won't be able to do summer activities. Kids need to be able to go experience the world, not locked up in a classroom. Kids need  a nice long break to  go do things. Make new friends at summer camps and learn skills.
" Some students like to enjoy their summer by participating in summer sports. Also, many families go on summer vacations, so year-round school would stop them from enjoying time with family."(Sines) They don't have the time to do that with the year round school. They need a long break to have fun with their family. " Both schools still go to school 180 days of the year."(Statistic Brain) It means parents would have a tough time coordinating. Plus if they miss school they would be missing a lot. The same or more because they have the same number of days." Lorraine Forte notes that year-round education can create problems for teachers, too, since vacation times are staggered and may interfere with system-wide teacher training."(compclass) That means the teachers who want to get training to get better at their job will have a hard time. It's spread out instead of a  nice long break. Plus the teachers might want to go on vacation too. The teachers can't go on vacation or get training. So it ends up being less quality teaching. Because it's the same time its all about the quality. I think that proves that students in Michigan need the long break for summer activities and vacations.

Works Cited
Seth. "Year Round School Statistics" Statistic Brain, 1.22.14

Sines, Julia. "Year Round School is a Bad Idea for Students." Pantagraph. October 17, 2009 12:00 am.  1.15.12

"Year Round School is not a good idea". Compclass 1.15.14.  " http://www.compclass.us/yre/my_view.html".

AHW 1/27/14

I am  really at school.  I can't wait till 4:05. We have a tech rehearsal for the play. I am on the tech crew and I will be the DJ. That's right I'm the DJ. Also my battery is at 3% so if this cuts off,well it might just do that. Anyways this is the first time we have technology to use and I can do my actual job. I like doing my actual job instead of helping the guys who just move the props. That's too boring. Wow still at 3%. I have a long battery. You are probably wondering why I have such little battery. Its because when I  was trying to  charge it over night  it unplugged. As a result it didn't charge and I'm trying every thing I can to save energy. Now I'm out of time so bye.
Man I forgot to post this. Ugh oh well

Argument Paragraph Draft 1.

Students in Michigan should not go to year round schools because they won't be able to go on long vacations. Kids need to be able to go experience the world, not locked up in a classroom. Kids need  a nice long break to  go do things. Make new friends at summer camps and learn skills.
" Some students like to enjoy their summer by participating in summer sports. Also, many families go on summer vacations, so year-round school would stop them from enjoying time with family."(Sines) They don't have the time to do that with the year round school. They need a long break to have fun with their family. " Both schools still go to school 180 days of the year."(Statistic Brain) It means parents would have a tough time coordinating. Plus if they miss school they would be missing a lot. The same or more because they have the same number of days." Lorraine Forte notes that year-round education can create problems for teachers, too, since vacation times are staggered and may interfere with system-wide teacher training."(compclass) That means the teachers who want to get training to get better at their job will have a hard time. It's spread out instead of a  nice long break. Plus the teachers might want to go on vacation too. The teachers can't go on vacation or get training. So it ends up being less quality teaching. Because it's the same time its all about the quality. I think that proves that students in Michigan need the long break for summer activities and vacations.

Works Cited
Seth. "Year Round School Statistics" Statistic Brain, 1.22.14

Sines, Julia. "Year Round School is a Bad Idea for Students." Pantagraph. October 17, 2009 12:00 am.  1.15.12

"Year Round School is not a good idea". Compclass 1.15.14.  " http://www.compclass.us/yre/my_view.html".

1/22/14

We did R&E's today. Mr.Joe also showed us his blog

Argumant Paparraph 1/21/14

Students in Michigan should not go to year round schools because they won't be able to go on long vacations. Kids need to be able to go experience the world, not locked up in a classroom. Kids need  a nice long break to  go do things. Make new friends at summer camps and learn skills.
" Some students like to enjoy their summer by participating in summer sports. Also, many families go on summer vacations, so year-round school would stop them from enjoying time with family."(Sines) They don't have the time to do that with the year round school. They need a long break to have fun with their family.
" Both schools still go to school 180 days of the year."(Statistic Brain) It means parents would have a tough time coordinating. Plus if they miss school they would be missing a lot. The same or more because they have the same number of days." Lorraine Forte notes that year-round education can create problems for teachers, too, since vacation times are staggered and may interfere with system-wide teacher training."(compclass) That means the teachers who want to get training to get better at their job will have a hard time. It's spread out instead of just a little there, a little here. Plus the teachers might want to go on vacation too. The teachers can't go on vacation or get training. So it ends up being less quality teaching. Because it's the same time its all about the quality. I think that proves that students in Michigan should not go to year round schools.

AHW 1/21/14

For you guys I'm going to write a story to hear my story.   Yay this is  going to be awesome.
Wait I already wrote something over the weekend I'll just use  that. 😀   I don't have to write hooked this anymore. Here it is.  It was probably  more than  five minutes oh well.
I'm writing in  the dark in my room on my bed.  You can't see .(pictures below)

Well this is my at home writing. The WIFI at school is out so I'm writing. I can't wait to get home. I have an hour of the best TV show ever. Psych. It's about a man named Shawn Spencer and he's pretending to be a psychic. Everyone thinks he is one except his best friend Gus, and his dad. He helps the police but also does his own cases. Really he is just amazing at noticing details. Growing up his dad was strict and taught him things about being a detective. His dad hates psychics and private dectitives. Shawn
is both of those. Shawn and his dad don't really like each other at all. Gus is the smarty paranoid one. He knows a whole lot of stuff and doesn't like breaking the law. Which they do a lot to find out information. Anyway its really funny. It comes on Wednesdays at 9:00 you should watch it.😅😅😅😅😂😂😂😂😂They also have their own adopted fruit. Its 🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍 PINEAPPLES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😎

My small Moment piece

This is my small moment narrative piece

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=7ha5wDq-xZA

1/17/14

The WiFi was down so I couldn't work on my essay

EFT 1/16/13

It takes place in Williamsburg
There's a part called the. Spoke
There are a lot of spokes.
Math is everywhere.
Shilling is pennies or something like that.
Mixing bread also is kneading
Everyone needed math indirectly
In modern times its still the same
Ammunition boxes were common
IN. and FT. Was the English system
Measure The small amount then measure the large amount
They learned through oral teaching
both men and women did calculations
Tailors made tents
There is a unit called ell.
They had serbairs instead of calculator.
The teams drew a plat
Blacksmith s used common measurement tools
There was textbooks in the 18th century
There was someone from Birmingham Michinan
The schools are the same in some things But also a lot of differences.

At home Writing 11/15

While very interesting morning yeah I guess it's sort of skipped some of my word but let's see how this goes my bedup laying in my bed resting what do I'm probably going to go watch the news with my mom but he does no no I tried to say but who knows 30 alright 30 there we go

ArgumentParagraph part 2 (still not done)

Students in MIchigan should not go to year round schools because they won't be able to go on long vacations. Kids need to be able to go experience the world, not locked up in a classroom. Kids need  a nice long break to  go do things. Make new friends at summer camps and learn skills.
" Some students like to enjoy their summer by participating in summer sports. Also, many families go on summer vacations, so year-round school would stop them from enjoying time with family."(Sines) They don't have the time to do that with the year round school. They need a long break to have fun with their family.
" Both schools still go to school 180 days of the year."(Statistic Brain) It means parents would have a tough time coordinating. Plus if they miss school they would be missing a lot. The same or more because they have the same number of days.

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1/14/13 at homewriting

Through watching Modern Family really funny show don't understand what about a lot about it well actually I do the confusion from Sallisaw like a part of it and I've never really seen the whole thing the whole episode videos from trying to say anyway it's a very interesting show the world about Modern Family say what you want this is a really good so and also I just got home from play practice and it was pretty good I help put up the bunch of building aren't the best but still they'll do so all that matters really anyway this is been talking when you just talking and writes down what you're saying this is James Bond spawn how to get James Bond spawn how to this is writing down some weird so I'm just playing its a clean I meant to say something mean not that it's a clean man so many typos because its not understanding what I'm trying to say most time is the summer time does not like the sex poke I wasn't trying to say poop that was trying to say well so what is what I do not know so don't know me better please make me one 1 bottle what follows that one or battle I am trying to say waffles now it works thank you Google actually I'm sure the fact in just a little bit.

Well that's fine I'll also since I mean a very very very long sentence anyway soon this is my back to put I'm trying to say is that I'm about to put down my favorite version of the you'll never walk alone video how the thing and really get into it and leave it in the life of Saint like you'll never walk alone or please don't touch the actually sing it with passion heart and no minutes and no money I did see the actual music video what do and places to Liverpool but of the smallest so many typos I never said no minutes and no money I never did say that and really so it's that simple just interpreted but it also is pretty good Google not simple so someone please help this system phone cause I would like this to be better now for something comes in black as I am so very very very very bored I meant to say I said some things in Spanish
Hola hola hola como stars súper bien estás tú estás descansarán mañana estás cansado okay that was very interesting how does that different words here's how it translated as much as I know hola hola oh my how something something good are you you are something tomorrow are you tired this was the translation of what so close my apps it's all just weird I'll just pretend we all should we eat free music oh okay thats the type something weird no it typed something system this is not the best but its nice n Easy so I like to use it Jackson 5 minutes already forgot to put down actually look at the bottom

www.youtube.com/watch?v=NN5AmHDTZ0M

Argument Paragraph draft. Not complete yet

Students in MIchigan should not go to year round schools because they won't be able to go on long vacations. Kids need to be able to go experience the world, not locked up in a classroom. Kids need  a nice long break to  go do things. Make new friends at summer camps and learn skills. (Superjman) I imagine it would be terrible and unrefreshing at a year long school. Kids have a long break to refresh and have to have fun.

SuperJMan, "Year Round Education is not  a Good Idea." CompClass. Unknown.

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Today I did a lot of things.First I updated myDRN and hyperlinked it.