Thursday, January 17, 2013

My story 1/17/13\

|]es, Thank you. It oh thank you. It is an honor. For my home town, Detroit Pistons. Oh Hi. I’m Rabaan. I went to SFU (South Florida University) and got a scholarship. I was the 1st pick overall by the Detroit Pistons. I am the MVP. We just won the NBA championship over my lifetime rival Mitchell Cabrera. I had a tough time in 5th Grade and would like to tell you how I got over it. To help you understand, School was the BEST part of my day.
I was just walking down the home from the bus stop. I walked slow purposely. The End of the First ¼ of the school year. The brisk November winds striking at my face. Brown, Orange, and Red were all beautifully on the trees. Leaves of all colors laying on the ground just waiting to be raked or moved into a jumping pile. The gray hard cement and my Blue and White Nike sneakers made a clatter as I walked.
I tried to avoid my family. They’re SO annoying. Every day when I walk in the house I hear, “Give it back” or “ Stop hitting me” or the most famous “ Mind your own business” or the most convincing “ Let me do my HOMEwork”. As I turned onto the the front yard of my white with green window outlined house. I became extremely scared. Hands shaking vigourisly as I slowly turned the doornob. I brought up my little strength and opened the door quickly.
“Stop Fighting” I yelled immediately No reply came, Or a sound. Thoughts raced through my mind like; A burgular came in didn’t he. Then he took Bonita and Savvana, (my 2 sisters). Then he shot my dad. I ran upstairs on the ugly brown staircase. Right when I reached the top I came to relief. Bonita and Savanna are at Girl Scouts.
My dad is just taking a nap because tonight is poker night. He goes with his friends to someones house and plays cards until 2:00 am. “ Whew” I sighed with relief “Man, that was close. Man for a second I thought they were kidnapped.” I said., I decided to skip snack and do my homework real quick. All I had was one just one math problem. I looked in my binder and poof. My Math Journal (MJ) wasn’t there. “Wha” I screamed loudly as my eyes grew big, Brows clinched, and my mouth stuck open. “Where did it, Oooooooooooooh.” I was in a hurry. 4:09 was on the clock. I had 6 minutes to get the the bus on the other side of the hall. I said “I have only digital homework.” I put on my coat and walked fast to the other side of the the school.” As I came back to present time i said, “Ooh, I knew I was forgetting something.” I walked into the kitchen with a brown, golden table on 1 side. The black stove on the other side. A double oven on the back wall. A black granite island in the middle where he eats. I dashed to the snack cabinet. Opened it quickly and fast with excitiment to eat. There was a kroger brand Toaster Pastry. I snacted the pastry and quickly put it in the Toaster Oven. Looked for the black WOW! remote. It was on the island. I snatched it and turned on the TV. “Snow is expected to come on Monday.” The TV blurted out. I quickly punched in the number 88. Avatar was on. “Ding” Came from the toaster oven. My stoumach was more than ready to have it be filled. I sprinted over to the oven and opened it. I then put the toaster pastry on a plate. I ate it quickly. “Man that filled the spot”. I declared.
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I read until dinner. Then after dinner. I ended up taking my shower. I took off
his sweats and t-shirt. Now I was bare naked in the bathroom. Next I turned on
the water, I only turned on hot when, "AHHHHHHHHHH" came an ear piercing scream
from my dad's room. I quickly knew that my dad never screamed like that. I
quickly scrambled my clothes on and ran up stairs. Then as I turned the corner,
I saw my dad, in a towel, just, standing there. Breathing heavily. "What's wrong?
dad? Are you okay?" I ask "Yeah, I'm fine. The water was just crazy cold. I was
just taking my shower, when suddenly boom. My water went cold." My dad replied” I immeaditly felt guilt and happiness as I knew what would come next.
Oh, sorry. I had just turned on the hot water when I heard you scream."I said “Well you better be sorry” My dad yelled “Go to your room!” I then ran downstairs to again enjoy the silence and not having to take shower. My sisters told dad that I love showers. Really they disgust me. All of this I am thinking about while I change. I get ready to go to bed. I start to sleep when; my nose sends me and alert. “The house is on fire!” I scream. I got scared out of my mind. How could a fire start in my house. My dad is already outside when I jump out the window. Blazes of fire, and heat blister me as I jump to safety. I felt realeved and scared because my HOUSE IS BURNING DOWN! Someone from our neighborhood must of called the fire department because they came just in time to have a diving catch in midair. “Here you go son. Now let’s beat this fire.” They make me go to a safe distance. They fire department says that they found a bomb partical in the rubble. Only one thing I would think be possible. My mom is a spy. My dad got divorced because he found out and didn’t
like spies. This is how he found out. My mom said she worked for Ford. He never exactly knew what she did. So, one day she went off on a business trip. Then, he went on to the plant where she worked called Ford website. They didn’t say anything about a mission trip. That’s where it started. Then by the time my mom got back, my dad bought a pocket gun. She came in the garage, “Honey I’m home.” She yelled My dad jumped from a hiding place and held her hostage with a gun. He told her about what she had learned then with a gun held to my moms head, she broke out of the hostage and punched my dad in the stomauch. Her badge went flying and it hit his stomauch on his way falling down. He picked it up and saw it. My mom loved him dearly and left with revenge on the mind. This was meant for my dad to die. Instead I almost died. With no other choice but h nu/ omelessness, I had to live with my Mom. My mom was a double sided spy who likes to kill. She is almost never home which means I can’t go to school because since my dad was outside when the house was on fire, he is in jail for attempting murder. My sisters went to live with me too. All I had to do was stand them. That’s almost not possible. They are always fighting with each other, and Mom. Let me give you an example My Mom is a HUGE Jimmy Ronda fan. She got a complete blu-ray set of Ronds. All 22 including the newest one Skyer
. My Mom has a Fun-Box 3. Which only reads Blu-Ray disks and you can use it to play videos. An Ah-ha moment happened. My family could watch the best Rond movie they have ever seen. He thought He asked his mom which was the best. She said GoldMoney. He got his family together and said we will watch a movie. He never said that it will help them bond. He thought it maybe, just maybe if they like it. They watched GoldMoney. Both Savanna and Bonita loved it.
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As the credits started on GoldFinger, They couldn't believe how good it was. They didn't say anything just it was on their faces. immeadtly Bonita stood up. Walked over to Saavanna. "Savanna, I am so sorry for being a mean sister. Sisters are supposed to be friends. I was just an enemy." Bonita said
"No, I was the one being mean. I was just being selfish and annoying you. I don't have anything against you, it is just..." At that moment Savanna began to have tears. " I was being so mean. Oh please forgive me." Savanna started crying.
"It's okay" Bonita started crying too. Then, at that moment. I just became speechless. They hugged. Actually hugged. At that moment God entered me.
I heard, "Rabaan, I God the father, son, and holy spirit have entered you. Go and spread the good news. He still knew that God was looking over him and all was well.

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